Shuwen, this is better however the head and the shoulders do not connect, they are drawn at two different scales. The clavicle is much too long, and so is the shoulder on the left side. The angled patch of hatching just below the shoulder/clavicle area does not make sense. And still the negative space is not attended to on the left side….
SHUWEN
Shuwen, this is better however the head and the shoulders do not connect, they are drawn at two different scales. The clavicle is much too long, and so is the shoulder on the left side. The angled patch of hatching just below the shoulder/clavicle area does not make sense. And still the negative space is not attended to on the left side….
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